tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26267848.post8753646507236883789..comments2008-11-19T09:41:56.956-06:00Silenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10269153674584521816noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26267848.post-68638550643697898212008-09-13T08:15:00.000-05:002008-09-13T08:15:00.000-05:00Woo-hoo!!! I have been hoping someone would pick her up! The "rules" said of course no consecutive chapters and me being a rule follower....but I may now continue the story cuz she's haunting me! Thanks and stay tuned.....RevDrKatehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06043193615563649333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26267848.post-65616844651839593442008-09-12T19:57:00.000-05:002008-09-12T19:57:00.000-05:00Hi Silent. I'm so glad you decided to add to the meme. You've added some interesting complexity to her father's death, and you've done a great job leaving the reader wanting more. Having the narrator suddenly remember Jim's name is a great detail for creating suspence. Just who is this Jim and how was he involved in her father's death?<BR/><BR/>Terrific addition. Thanks for playing along.Ruth Hull Chatlienhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08797146501548509911noreply@blogger.com